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...I broke your window
when reality came crashing through.

I got sick of waiting for the weather,
although I'd take your rain cloud any day.

Like water breaking through a dam
my words flowed forward.

Desperately trying to reach you
they lost their meaning along the way.

I kept my emotions bottled up too long
and they lost their flavor.

It was love that I wanted to taste with you.

Now I scrape it from my bleeding tongue.

Maybe it was just infatuation
rather than devotion.

But regardless of what is most believed,
I was tired of being pushed away.

More than anything right now
I'm sorry...

...I met you.
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Bunnyluv-from-RMD Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009  Hobbyist
Waaah~~! <3 this is awesomely sad! ; o ; ♥ great job~!!
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my-life-is-dead Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009   Writer
That's beautiful!!!
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PockyInfluenza Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009
:noes: that's so saddddddd! :iconruncryplz:
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Mera-Uchiha Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww. D= How sad!
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Wilford111 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
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Imopoki Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009  Student General Artist
^^ Tenks! For the :+fav: too.
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Wilford111 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
No problem ^^
I really enjoyed it.
Normally I don't understand poems @_@
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